How to improve my video

How to improve my video-
I think that I could improve my video by using shots that flow better and do not look jumpy, as this made the video look unprofessional. I also think that my video would flow better if I shot the same thing more than once to make sure that I have the best lighting, sound and flow of dialogue I need to make it look better. Also I had noticed that the array of different shot types I used was not very big so I will expand on the shot types I will use. It would also improve my video if I was a bit more experimental with it, because I would like it to be able to entertain my audience and I feel at the moment I am not achieving this. The over the shoulder shot is an important shot to show when having a  conversation scene as it lets the audience see the characters point of view so to improve on my over the shoulder shots I will not only use them to show when the person is speaking but also the other persons face who is not speaking to give a fresh outlook on the scene. Looking back on my video I regret using the zoom as it was not steady enough to make it look good so when I re-do the video I am not going to use this technique again.

Shots I am going to use-
Long shot
Medium shot
Close-up
Medium close up
Over the shoulder shot
Breaking the fourth wall
Establishing shot
Medium long shot
Extreme close up